Deputy Sheriff Louis

what happened today in my book was when nurse Holly was cleaning Cali's feet Cali's mom was telling her about the day she was born and hoe Griff her dad had kept making the house great for a baby to live in and how Griff was being so helpful that she had sent him to the park with their son Ben. But Griff was worried that the baby would come but she had said the baby would not come for a couple more hours. so after they left she laid down in their bed, and it started to downpour and it was thundering and lightning outside, and but not ten more minutes the baby was about to come, and she was talking about how she was driving at a snails pace because of all the rain. After the story Cali just started to scram for no reason but when Cali's mom turned around she saw her son Ben all bloody and cut up because Griff had beat him up because he was so drunk. but after the doctor gave Cali sedative Cali then began to calm down and as she fell asleep Cali's mom thought that she was trying to say something, but then it was to late Cali had already fallen asleep.